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Sunday, December 24, 2017

Review: In Mistletoe by Tammy L. Bailey

Title: In Mistletoe
Author: Tammy L. Bailey
Genre/Age: Contemporary Romance/Adult
Series: None
Publisher: Wild Rose Press
Format: ebook via Reading Alley
Rating: ✺✺✺
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SynopsisAt twenty-five, Grace Evans is steadily picking up the pieces of everyone else’s life. So, when her younger sister decides to turn into a runaway bride just four weeks before the wedding, Grace, drops everything to chase after her and bring her back home. Only, when the trail leads to Mistletoe, Washington, she finds herself at the mercy of the town’s most handsome and emotionally unavailable bachelor.

Ex-Army officer, Ayden McCabe, has three creeds in life: never make the first move, never fall in love, and never take anyone to Mistletoe’s Christmas Dance. Wanting nothing more than to keep his matchmaking sister from meddling in his personal life, he agrees to help Grace if she agrees to play his girlfriend. Too brunette and meek for his taste, Ayden believes Grace can’t tempt him enough to break any of his creeds. He could not be more wrong.


**Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book.**

Wish I could have loved this more...

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Grace has traveled halfway across the country in order to find her runaway bride sister. Shortly after arriving, she discovers that her job maybe more difficult than she predicted. The only place to stay in the mountain town is with a man who has a rough reputation among the ladies. And he wants something in return: a fake girlfriend for a week.

Ayden has no intentions of settling down. In fact, he'd love nothing more than to sell his bed and breakfast and focus on his construction business full-time. Marriage and babies are not in his future. So when his sister's meddling reaches an all-time high, he needs a way to get her off his back. And the new woman in town just might be the answer to his problem.

As Grace tries to find her sister and understand the man she's been shackled to, she has to fight the weather and the local women who consider her to be a threat. Toss in a jerk of an ex-boyfriend and you have an even bigger recipe for disaster. In the end, she may leave Mistletoe as a completely different woman and possibly even with a broken heart.

I've read another book by this author and I loved it, so it was easy for me to volunteer to review this one. And while I didn't hate the story, I didn't love it either. I considered quitting the book about halfway through, when I realized the story wasn't really going anywhere, but I persevered. And it did get better toward the end, but it just wasn't enough to save the story for me by that point.

What I liked about the book was mostly the idea of it. A fake girlfriend romance? Yes, please. Christmas-themed story to get me in the holiday mood? Yep, I wanted that too. But after only a few chapters, I could tell this wasn't exactly the story I thought it would be. While it was fairly well-written, I just couldn't bring myself to really enjoy it.

I mostly had trouble with connecting to and accepting the characters. Grace was the biggest pushover and probably the most pathetic female lead I have read about all year. I don't mind a confused heroine learning to trust herself and so on, but when I found out that she has broken up with her ex over 10 times, I lost pretty much all respect for her. Sometimes she would say something that impressed me, but then she would immediately do or say something to ruin it.

Ayden wasn't much better in the personality department. I wanted to like him since he did have a good sense of family. But his internal thoughts were likely what killed his character for me. I don't mind a hero who isn't a prince charming, yet I often found myself wondering why anyone would like this guy when he supposedly had throngs of women after him.

As for the plot coming to life, that part confused me too. I understood why Grace initially went there looking for her sister. I even understood the reason for coming across Ayden, since she needed a place to stay while there. But I didn't see the need for the fake girlfriend agreement when Ayden clearly had a handle on his lack-of-a-love-life. That part felt a little forced. The constant delaying in searching for her sister didn't help things either, I'm afraid.

Toward the end, the story did slowly begin to come together for me. I can't say that I rooted for this pairing by then, but I did want to see some sort of satisfying conclusion after all of the hell Grace went through for practically no reason at all. And the ending was pretty good, even if I didn't love the whole 'big secret' conspiracy part.

In closing...
Everyone has different tastes and this one just wasn't mine, but I will still read more from this author in the future. 3 suns!



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Wednesday, December 6, 2017

Review: The Right Kind of Rogue by Valerie Bowman

Title: The Right Kind of Rogue
Author: Valerie Bowman
Genre/Age: Historical Romance/Adult
Series: Playful Brides (Book Eight)
Publisher: St. Martin's Press
Format: Paperback via Goodreads Giveaway 
Rating: ✺✺✺
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SynopsisCan two star-crossed lovers come together―until death do they part? 

Viscount Hart Highgate has decided to put his rakish ways behind him and finally get married. He may adore a good brandy or a high-speed carriage race, but he takes his duties as heir to the earldom seriously. Now all he has to do is find the right kind of woman to be his bride―ideally, one who’s also well-connected and well-funded. . .

Meg Timmons has loved Hart, the brother of her best friend, ever since she was an awkward, blushing schoolgirl. If only she had a large dowry―or anything to her name at all. Instead, she’s from a family that’s been locked in a bitter feud with Hart’s for years. And now she’s approaching her third London season, Meg’s chances with him are slim to none. Unless a surprise encounter on a deep, dark night could be enough to spark a rebellious romance. . .for all time?


**Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book.**

Where did it all go wrong? Help me understand!

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Have you ever had your wonderful day ruined for no good reason? Like you were going along just fine and suddenly everything just drops off the side of a cliff to crash and burn? Yeah, that's how I felt while reading this book. Super bummer and I'm actually quite sad about it.

This started off so well. I mean it was practically perfect for the first 2/3 of the book. Sure, the secondary characters were a little obnoxious and I occasionally wanted to choke out a character's parent, but everything else was great. Meg was a woman I could root for and Hart made me swoon over and over again. I was completely smitten with this story and the couple.

And then... Dun, dun, dun!

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The twist happens, leaving me scratching my head and wondering how it could have gone so wrong so quickly. That was frustrating, to say the least. I don't mind a surprise or two being tossed in, but this one was confusing for me. It left me wondering where my beloved characters had gone. Hart was much too smart to suddenly turn so stupid. And Meg's plan to win his heart was just as terrible. What happened?

I think I just felt like the plot twist was entirely forced and then it drug on. When characters begin to behave in a way that is completely opposite of how they did for the first 3/4 of the book, I wonder if I really knew them at all. And Hart was a lot of things in the beginning but cruel wasn't one of them. I started to genuinely hate his character. Meg's scheming was a bit much as well. As if this wasn't enough, it had to go on for several chapters. In the end, I feel like I fell into a dark hole and I'm still there, sadly.

Does this have a happy ending? Yes, it does. Do I believe the ending is believable after such massive conflict between the couple? Not really. I think the story just turned too dark, too fast and just when I was thoroughly enjoying the light. It's a little depressing, to be honest. I wasn't prepared for it. Maybe this was a case of hating to see characters that I adored have to suffer for reasons that I can't understand. 

In closing...
I want to believe that this is an isolated incident and that other books in this series will leave me smiling. I'll have to read them to find out. Three suns!

Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Review & Tour: Zoe's Mates by Izzy Szyn


Title: Zoe's Mates
Author: Izzy Szyn
Genre/Age: Paranormal Romance/Erotica
Series: None
Publisher: Smexy Publishing
Format: ebook via Reviews by Crystal
Rating: ✺✺✺
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SynopsisPreviously released under the title Sexual Healing in the Coming In Hot Boxed Set. 

Zoe's Mates has been edited with some new material. 

Paramedic Zoe Whitaker is set to become engaged to Saratoga Falls Hospital's Chief of Staff Derek Barnes. But when his twin brother Liam returns with his lover Brent Taylor, Zoe begins to think she's with the wrong twin. 


Liam and Brent came back from Ravana for one reason only, to claim Zoe Whitaker. 




NOTE: Adult Content Ahead

“What are you doing to me?” she asked them. “Making you ours,” Brent brushed the hair from her face. “You’re our mate, we’ve waited too long to take what is ours.

What has always been ours.” Lifting her by the waist, Brent laid her across the padded bench in front of the couch. Kneeling between her thighs, Brent opened her lower lips, before sinking his tongue inside her. “BRENT,” she cried out. Damn, that felt good, she thought, opening her thighs wider, her hands going to Brent’s head, pressing him closer.

Suddenly Zoe was glad that Derek wasn’t willing to do this for her. It seemed right that Brent and Liam were the first ones to give her the experience she’d always craved. “I love this table, it gives us the right angle to do certain things,” Liam said.

Zoe’s head lowered, Liam’s cock near her lips. Mentally licking her lips in anticipation. She just hoped she did it right, “Liam, I’ve never,” she started to admit.

You’ve never sucked cock before?” asked Liam, “Derek is even dumber than I thought. I’ve been waiting for the day that I can see your sexy lips wrapped around my cock. Sliding in and out of your mouth, down your throat.

”“OH FUCK ,” she yelled. Her body stretched, never in a million years did she think it would ever feel this good.



New York Times Bestselling Author Izzy Szyn was born in May of 2014 when a friend dared her to write. Born and raised in Detroit, Mi. Izzy now lives in Oklahoma City with her furchild Misty, the friendliest Chihuahua/Terrier you will ever meet. Currently works in a call center, where she writes in between phone calls.



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With some cleaning up, it would be a better story.


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Zoe isn't sure she should marry her long-time boyfriend, Derek. He isn't exactly what she wants in a husband and if she's being honest, she's still in love with his twin brother. So when the twin in question comes back into town with his lover and their eyes set on Zoe, she thinks this might be the sign she's been looking for. But Liam and Brent have some secrets up their sleeve that Zoe would never have guessed. And Derek? Well, he won't give Zoe up that easily either...

There were things I liked about this novella and things I didn't. Keep in mind that I have not read the original version of the story which was included in the anthology. My problems were mostly with the way the book was written/edited versus the actual story being told. So while I am critical in some regards, I didn't regret reading the book once I was finished.

I'm always lenient on grammar mistakes and typos with self-published works. On the other hand, when there is an editor listed or the book has a publisher, I am not so forgiving about errors because most of them obviously should have been caught. And unfortunately, this novella was full of them. There are punctuation blunders, wrong words used several times, and missing quotes among other things. 

But the biggest problem was, by far, a name mix-up at the very beginning. It says that Brent and Liam shared a womb, when it is supposed to be Derek and Liam. I checked and this error is also in the Kindle Unlimited version too. Definitely not a good place to mix up the names since we don't want to give anyone the impression that our lovers are brothers. *wide eyes*

Putting aside the errors and typos, I did find one other problem with the book. The main character, Zoe, is a pretty likable woman who seems to have a good idea of what her future with Derek would be like. She isn't one of these gals with the wool pulled over her eyes, so I was a little surprised when she takes the entire paranormal confession a little too easily. I mean, it's a pretty big secret and she was barely fazed. Even in a novella-length book, I wish it had been more realistic in that regard.

The two men who Zoe finds herself falling for are pretty good characters too. I was glad to see that they each had their own voice, which doesn't always happen with multiple male characters. They were a little high-handed with Zoe at the beginning, but some relationships are like that so it didn't bother me all that much.

What really saved the story for me was probably the love scenes. There is a lot of naughty time here and since there are three characters, there is quite a bit of variety in the scenes too. Once they began, I enjoyed them enough to overlook some of the other parts I liked a little less. The scene with Cassidy was a surprise, but I didn't mind it.

In closing... 
I think if this had been a full-length novel with more time for character and relationship development, it would be a more enjoyable story. Either way, it definitely could benefit from another pass with a good editor. Three suns!


Sunday, September 17, 2017

Review: A Hundred Kisses by Jean M. Grant

Title: A Hundred Kisses
Author: Jean M. Grant
Genre/Age: Fantasy Romance/Adult
Series: None
Publisher: Wild Rose Press
Format: ebook via The Romance Reviews
Rating: ✺✺✺
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Synopsis1296
Two wedding nights. Two dead husbands.

Deirdre MacCoinneach wishes to understand her unusual ability to sense others’ lifeblood energies…and vows to discover if her gift killed the men she married. Her father’s search for a new and unsuspecting suitor for Deirdre becomes complicated when rumors of witchcraft abound.

Under the façade of a trader, Alasdair Montgomerie travels to Uist with pivotal information for a Claimant seeking the Scottish throne. A ruthless baron hunts him and a dark past haunts him, leaving little room for alliances with a Highland laird or his tempting daughter.

Awestruck when she realizes that her unlikely travel companion is the man from her visions, a man whose thickly veiled emotions are buried beneath his burning lifeblood, Deirdre wonders if he, too, will die in her bed if she follows her father’s orders. Amidst magic, superstition, and ghosts of the past, Alasdair and Deirdre find themselves falling together in a web of secrets and the curse of a hundred kisses…

The Romance Review

**Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book.**

A hundred kisses to break a curse?

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Deirdre has given up. After her two marriages ended with corpses for husbands, she doesn't want to go through that again. No matter how much her father wishes to marry her off to the next available man who walks through their doors. Even the handsome trader, who haunts her dreams. It isn't worth the risk to his life. If only her heart would listen to her head.

Alasdair is on a mission of great importance. Getting sidetracked by a gorgeous woman who has quickly enchanted him isn't helping. Neither is her very persistent father who wants Alasdair to wed Deirdre immediately. Alasdair has a message to deliver and he surprised to find that the woman in question intends to travel with him. Staying away from her just got a lot harder.

But there is trouble brewing at every turn and the couple's journey isn't an easy one.  And after arriving at their destination, the pair have trouble keeping their secrets hidden as they grow to care for each other. Toss in a few vengeful men, some magical powers, and our couple will have to learn to trust each other if they plan to survive and begin their happily ever after. 

If I'm being honest, this book was rather wordy and I skimmed quite a bit of it. Probably half of it. I realized in the first few chapters that it was a lot of telling and detail but light on the dialogue. Yet, I'm sure you're wondering why I rated this as a 'good read' when I skimmed most of it. Here's why.

This book had a lot of unique qualities and things I did enjoy. The main characters, for instance. I liked Deirdre from the start. I could see and understand her struggle with wanting to give up on ever having a marriage after the deaths of her husbands. I felt for her and wanted her to find a match that wouldn't die at dawn.

Even Alasdair was a likable character. There was a lot of secrecy surrounding his arrival and the real reason he was traveling through was slowly revealed as the story went on. He hid behind an alias for most of the book, but I still found him to be genuine and I rooted for him to find a way to win Deirdre's heart and break the curse.

The thing that really stood out to me was the magical element of the book. I have read a lot of fantasy with witches, clairvoyants, and the like. This story has a mixture of both and additional magics that I haven't really seen before. I think it was probably the curse and the mystery surrounding the odd relative, Venora, that kept me turning the pages. I could have done without some of the constant talk about the pending war though.

In closing...
A good story with magic, kisses, and swords. Three suns!



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Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Review: Open Hearts by Eve Dangerfield

Title: Open Hearts
Author: Eve Dangerfield
Genre/Age: Romance/Erotica
Series: None
Publisher: Self-published
Format: ebook via The Romance Reviews
Rating: ✺✺✺
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SynopsisAsh Bennett’s had enough. She’s not wasting any more time longing for Prince Charming and getting stuck with Prince 'Babe, What’s For Dinner?'
If she can’t find a respectable, self-sufficient man to start a family with she’ll just do it by herself. It's better than pinning all your hopes on a guy who's never going to make you happy. Take Dean Sherwood, sure he’s stupid hot but that doesn’t pay the bills or remember to pick you up from the airport. No, they’re just having a little fun until Ash can find a donor. Right?
If only it was that easy... 
Everyone loves Dean. He’s easygoing, a great footballer and always up for a beer or sixteen. He also has the attention span of a Cocker Spaniel on MDMA, but that’s never been a problem where the opposite sex is concerned. At least it wasn’t until he met Ash. Beautiful, driven and wild in bed; she's all he's ever wanted in a wife. 
Unfortunately, he's far from what she wants in a husband, what with his perpetually empty bank account and inability to cook anything other than bacon. When she tells him he’s not baby-daddy material, Dean vows to become the man she needs, whatever it takes. 
Open Hearts is the sequel to Locked Box. It features angst, bogans, hot sex, naked snowboarding and the triumphant return of Max and Julia who are dealing with a romantic dilemma of their own.


The Romance Review

**Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book.**

When the wrong person turns out to be perfect for you...

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Ashley is tired of her life. Her boyfriend is a no-good jerk and she has a past that's impossible to outrun. She's always wanted a real family and her biological clock is ticking. When she finally gets the courage to break up with her moocher boyfriend, there is only one thing that Ashley wants to do. She's going to have a baby. One way or the other.

Just before Ashley is about to start her quest for motherhood, she meets a man who is wrong for her in every way. So why does being with him feel so good? Dean has a rough history too, and he has a video online to prove it. He also isn't the most responsible man in the world. He is terrible with money and can't pay attention to save his life.

So when Ash receives an offer from a doctor to father her child, she's sure that this is the better choice. She can't rely on Dean to provide for her and one sperm donor is just as good as another, right? But when the time comes to decide who she will make a baby with, Ashley realizes that she just might want the whole family package after all.

I'm coming to find that perhaps this author's writing isn't my cup of tea. I can't really pinpoint one specific thing, it's more of a collection of small book traits that I don't seem to be a big fan of. There may be a disconnect because the setting of this story is in Australia. There is terminology I don't quite understand, the dialogue is rather brash, and some of the humor is almost too awkward for me to find funny.

I also had a hard time with the heroine of the story. I didn't despise Ashley but I also didn't love some of her choices and internal dialogue. I could understand the fact that she wants a baby, but her judgement of Dean was rather harsh considering her own life choices had been pretty terrible until this point. She was also really selfish in the bedroom which irked me.

Dean was a fun character, despite the fact that he was written to be a complete numbskull. I found his personality to be endearing and unique. I hate that Ashley (and everyone, really) were so hard on him. He didn't deserve it. By the end of the book, I wasn't sure if Ashley deserved Dean either. He was such a sweetheart and very loyal to her even when she wasn't being kind in return.

But there was a highlight to the story and that was the intense love scenes. Even from the first one, I could appreciate the well-written bedroom antics in this book. Even when they weren't necessarily happening in the bedroom. In fact, the make-up scene was so darn good that I'm glad I read this story just for that one scene alone.

In closing...
Even though it may not be my cup of tea, it certainly could be yours. Three suns!



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Friday, August 4, 2017

Review & Tour: Trolling by Emma Brady


Title: Trolling
Author: Emma Brady
Genre/Age: Fantasy Romance/Adult
Series: Tammara Series (Book One)
Publisher: Self-published
Format: ebook via Enchanted Book Promotions
Rating: ✺✺✺
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SynopsisLily Faye-Anderson thought her bad luck was ending when she and her sisters inherited her uncle's house. Finding a green man chained in the basement changed that. Now she must trust this sexy troll to take her into a magical kingdom and rescue the only family she has. 

Theno woke up with missing pieces to his memory but an angel saving him. When her sisters are kidnapped, he is willing to do anything to help her in return. The problem is, if he can't remember who he is, how can he trust himself not to hurt her? 

Together, the two of them will go to the land of Tammara to bring back the other Faye girls. They will have to face an Evil Queen, who wants to find the door and cross over into the human world. There is also the matter of an intense sexual attraction between them and the need for Theno to discover his identity. Does a troll get to have a happy ending?



"What is Nick doing with them?" whispered Jamey, looking through the dark at the man in question.

"He's the Queen's consort."

"Oh." The young girl had a crestfallen expression. "That's the real reason he brought us here then?"

"They were lovers for many years before he got stuck in your world. The two of them took pleasure in doing so many evil things to people."

“I thought he just wanted to get home.” The young girl had thought he could be redeemed. “He never hurt us, even when he could have.”

“He’s a phoenix. Those types prefer deception to violence.”

There was a tremble in her lips. "Is he dangerous?"

Theno nodded. A phoenix was one of the most dangerous creatures in their world, simply because they couldn't be killed. At least not permanently. If they died, they were simply reborn again by the flames. That gave them an advantage over those with mortality.

They must have been too loud with their whispering because the light flickered again. Nick was getting even closer to where they were hiding. Theno could smell him and recognized it as the same scent as the mysterious intruder. Now things were starting to fall into place.

"Is that you, Theno my dear?" The Queen called out. "Have you come to try and stop me again? You can come out now if that's the case."

She waited for a response but he wasn't going to give her one. Nick was just waiting for the moment to attack. The cool, wet walls of the grotto were not a guarantee of protection against a man who used fire as a weapon. Theno didn't want to risk Lily or her sisters getting hurt on accident.

When she didn't get an answer the Queen decided to do something else about them. "Nick, please go and get my wayward troll. Bring him back to me and kill the rest of them."

"Gladly, my Queen."

Emma graduated with both an English degree and a library sciences degree. She has always been an avid reader of romance, since she first fell in love with Wuthering Heights. After college she decided she didn’t want to just read books and started writing them. She has already started in both urban fantasy and historical romance, but doesn’t rule out other projects in the future. Living in Kansas with her tiny lapdog and a couple rambunctious nephews, she spends most of her time reading, writing and enjoying a good cup of coffee. 


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What are the odds you'll find your match is a troll chained up in the basement?

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Lily is trying to do best by her younger sisters. After inheriting a house from an unknown uncle, they move in straight away. The house is filled with strange items but no more than the one hidden in the basement: a creature shackled to a door. He's large and green and definitely not human. Setting him free is just the beginning of an adventure that teaches Lily and her sisters the truth about their family and themselves.

Theno can't remember how he came to be chained to a door in a world that isn't his own. His memories come back in flashes and only confuse him more. Who was he before he crossed the barrier between worlds and why did he leave his home? Better yet, who is this beautiful woman who insists on helping him despite the chance that he might have been a monster in his old life?

This will be one of those reviews that highlights both good and bad things about the story. I believe honest feedback is better for an author but also harder to come by. So while I may criticize elements of the book, remember there were things I liked about it, too. This shouldn't put anyone off from reading the book. Underneath the weaker writing skill was a fun story.

I'll start with pacing. Boy, this story is fast-paced. So fast, in fact, that I was often confused as to how we went from one place/time to another without any sort of break or transition between. In those instances, a scene break would have been beneficial. Having to go back and re-read a whole page just to understand what happened should not be necessary.

Since the pacing is fast, the story tends to suffer a bit. I think the relationship between Theno and Lily was a good match, but since it happened so quickly, it felt a lot more like insta-love than actual romance. And we all know how the general population feels about insta-love. Lily was understanding and trusting much too quickly and that made the relationship less realistic. If I found a creature trapped in my cellar, I wouldn't have reacted so calmly. My sisters would have freaked out, too. Even in fantasy, there needs to be a level of realism to make the story believable.

But it wasn't just the romance side that was smothered by the story moving so quickly. While reading, I was jerked around between scenes and new characters were introduced so fast that it was hard to get a good sense of where we were before we're thrust into another scene and meet yet another character. It was a very ambitious storyline. Maybe too ambitious.

I wanted to really become immersed in the story and that's hard to do when a scene barely skims the surface before it ends. Books are not like tv/movies. On the big screen, we have a visual aid to help us understand the story. We can see facial expressions and hear vocal tones. We can see the settings with our eyes. In a book, we need the author to paint the picture of the setting and draw the characters with their words.

One thing that cannot be disputed is the creativity of the story. This author has a knack for weaving together a tale with colorful characters and surprises. It was a mixture of new and old featuring fairy tale folk that we already know but with a twist to their stories. I was impressed by the fantasy story being told, overall. The big secret revealed at the end truly shocked me. But I did suspect that Nick wasn't what he appeared to be.

My last criticism is really the most important of all and that is the technicality of the writing. This is something that will come with experience, though an editor would certainly have helped the author to find her voice while avoiding most mistakes. There were several grammar errors and typos. Instances of 'telling' instead of 'showing'. Also words repeated, even in the same sentence. By the end of the first chapter, I could tell that this was a new author. I have no doubt that she will find her way with more experience, but I hate to see such creativity weighed down by typos and an accelerated pacing.

In closing... 
I am curious to see what the next book has in store for us and which sister will meet her match. I have a feeling that our phoenix will get to join in the fun. Three suns!